Sponsorship letters

I greet all first. Guess it is my first post in this forum.

Well, I want to apply for a university. And need a help in writing a letter of statement.

I would appreciate if any one initiate to assist me and check/revise with valuable comments the attached essay. It is just a plain text. I can't download the letter, so i'll sent it via pm.

Thank you very much!

Regards,

Me

Guest wrote:

Hello, I was wondering if anyone might be able to provide me with some tips when writing a letter asking for sponsorship. This letter is probably going to have to be generic, so that it can be sent to several different local businesses. It will be appealing for the donation of some funds to help send members of the local Pony Club (a national organization dedicated to youth, horsemanship, sportsmanship, and leadership, see www.ponyclub.org for more info) to compete in the USPC National Championships. Our club is new to the region, but is making great strides in competitions, which is why three members have qualified for Nationals. However, the entry fee alone is $300 per rider, and most families in our club are not rich by any stretch of the imagination. As you can see, we would very much like any help that could be given by local businesses to sponser our riders. However, having never written a letter of this sort, I was hoping some of you here might have some tips of what to do and not to do. Thank you very much!

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