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New2grammar  +  510481 Tue, 06 May 08 05:26 PM

He stick/stuck his head out of window and grinned as he escaped while
his ex wife pulled out of the parking lot onto the street
gaining on him.

1. What is the past tense for stick, stuck?

2. Are there any mistakes?

Thanks in advance!

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GrammarGuy  +  510512 Tue, 06 May 08 07:20 PM

"stuck"

Rewritten, with other changes:

"He stuck his head out of the window and grinned as he escaped, while
his ex-wife pulled out of the parking lot onto the street,
gaining on him"

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New2grammar, 1 yr 200 days ago

Thanks GrammarGuy!

Grammar Geek  +  510520 Tue, 06 May 08 07:49 PM

Hey, N2G, I was having trouble posting.

There is a problem with your use of "escape" -- that says he got away, but you later say his ex was gaining on him. Also, don't forget to end your sentences with a period.

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New2grammar  +  510523 Tue, 06 May 08 08:01 PM

I understand "as" as in the process of. In this case, it would be
"in the process of escaping" which means he'd not gotten away though he was trying to.

Thanks for the period advice. I have been having that problem recently because it takes
really 10 full seconds for the letters to show up on my screen. A
lot of times, I correct only the critical typos because each time i do that
it takes 10 sec to refresh. I can't wait to get my new laptop back from repair.
It's killing me.


 

Grammar Geek  +  510532 Tue, 06 May 08 09:02 PM

Ouch. That sounds frustrating!

If you say "as he escaped" the readers will assume he DID escape.

As he attempted to escape, or as he tried to escape, or even in the process of his attempted escape.

New2grammar, 1 yr 200 days ago

I think I get it now. Thanks GG.

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