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WesternAmerican  #394256  Fri, 20 Jul 07 09:28 AM
You tried to trick me, it was a stratagem
You tried to trick me, it was stratagem.

Which one?
  
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Mister Micawber  #394265  Fri, 20 Jul 07 10:28 AM

Neither; both are comma-splice sentences, and stratagem is countable.  Use:

You tried to trick me; it was a stratagem.

  
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WesternAmerican  #394267  Fri, 20 Jul 07 10:36 AM
Thank you very much, Mica.
When do we exactly use comma-splice?
  
Maple  #394278  Fri, 20 Jul 07 11:28 AM

A comma-splice is:

The mistaken effort to link two complete sentences with a form of punctuation inadequate to the task. "He had no evidence to support his argument, therefore he lost the debate to his rival" is a comma splice. The comma should be replaced by a semicolon or a period.
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Yoong Liat  #394686  Sat, 21 Jul 07 11:09 AM

 WesternAmerican wrote:
Thank you very much, Mica.
When do we exactly use comma-splice?

You tried to trick me, it was a stratagem.

Both  You tried to trick me and it was a stratagem are sentences.

So you need to use a full stop instead of a comma for each sentence.

Is my explanation  about 'comma splice' clear?

Best wishes

  
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Mister Micawber  #394806  Sat, 21 Jul 07 03:37 PM

To make it even clearer:  a comma-splice sentence is a mistake in ordinary writing, though it is sometimes used to good effect in literature and rhetoric.

  
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