Help with subject-verb agreement

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CraigM23  #301174  Wed, 06 Dec 06 10:32 AM
The sentence: The old man, who I thought had fallen alseep, along with this other guy standing nearby, both laugh.



I have two questions about this sentence, regarding the word both and the word laugh. First, is both unnecessary? (Seems correct to me using laugh.) Second, should it be laugh or laughs, becuase if it just the old man it would be laughs. (The old man laughs. They laugh.) Not sure.


Any help would be appreciated.
Thanks,
Craig

  
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Inchoateknowledge  #301208  Wed, 06 Dec 06 12:29 PM

Hi

The old man, who I thought had fallen alseep, along with this other guy standing nearby, both laugh.

The old man = subject 1

who I thought had fallen alseep = modifies the subject 1

along with = conjunction

other guy standing nearby = modified subject 2

The old man, who I thought had fallen alseep, along with this other guy standing nearby, = compound subject, of which both are modified. This is the same as
Peter and Paul

Peter and paul (both) laugh -- OK

How about them:

The old man, who I thought had fallen alseep, along with this other guy, were standing nearby, both/0 laughing.

or

The old man, who I thought had fallen alseep, along with this other guy standing nearby, were both/0 laughing.


 

  
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