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Latest post Fri, Sep 9 2005 12:33 PM by Antonia. 4 replies.
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Antonia  +  131729 Mon, 29 Aug 05 09:46 AM

Can you please tell me if it is OK in the sentence:

During negotiation it is necessary to make sure that in return for our concessions we always get what is approximately close to that/their value, as well as not to accept what does not suit us or what we would never accept in more relaxed circumstances.

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Waïti  +  131787 Mon, 29 Aug 05 02:02 PM

'we always get'... Maybe 'we always obtain' if you want to be more formal ?

'that/their' I think it has to be 'their value'.

'... as well as not to...' I sense it should be constructed the same as the previous part, so '... as well as do not accept...' since it is intended to complement 'we always...' : we always get... and we always do not accept...

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Antonia, 4 yr 85 days ago

Thank you Waiti for your suggestions, corrections and most important-your time.

MrPedantic  +  135342 Fri, 09 Sep 05 12:24 AM

An alternative:

During negotiations we must ensure that we get a good return for our concessions. We must also reject anything that does not suit us, or that we would not accept in more favourable circumstances.

MrP

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Antonia, 4 yr 74 days ago
I find your post ''very helpful'' Mr Pedantic, thank you!
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