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Latest post Fri, May 9 2008 6:27 PM by Huevos. 1 replies.
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Vincent Teo  +  511689 Fri, 09 May 08 04:29 PM

Can I say,

One sunny day, John was on his way back to home. There were two men who were going to steal the car. They wanted to take away John's father's new car.

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Huevos  +  511733 Fri, 09 May 08 06:27 PM
 I wouldn't use away there.

Also the sentences don't flow well together. I can't help you further without context, i.e. were the thieves at the same location as John? And was John driving his father's car? Etc? 
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