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Stevenukd  +  180993 Tue, 10 Jan 06 07:07 AM

Dear Teachers,

1. I bought some villages yesterday at my hometown.

2. I went to my old Teacher's house in my holiday.

3. I saw your husband going out of the house this morning.

4. I bought  a present for my mother's birthday yesterday.

5. I caught a taxi from the airport to my hotel in the center of HCM City at 2 yesterday.

6. We talked to a lot of/many friends  in the party yesterday.

7. She wanted to eat at a restaurant but she didn't have any money last Tuesday.

- Are these natural to say?

Thanks a lot to Teachers,

 Stevenukd.

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Danyoo  +  181005 Tue, 10 Jan 06 09:12 AM
I am not a 'teacher' but below are my replies.

 Stevenukd wrote:

Dear Teachers,

1. I bought some villages yesterday at my hometown.
Grammatically ok...but you don't often hear of someone 'buying villages'.  Buying some land, yes.

2. I went to my old teacher's house during my holiday.

3. I saw your husband going out of the house this morning. OK

4. I bought  a present for my mother's birthday yesterday. OK
Though I am thinking it might be better to say: Yesterday I bought a present for my mother's birthday.

5. I caught a taxi from the airport to my hotel in the center of HCM City at 2 yesterday. OK

6. We talked to a lot of/many friends at the party yesterday.

7. She wanted to eat at a restaurant but she didn't have any money last Tuesday. OK

- Are these natural to say?

Thanks a lot to Teachers,

 Stevenukd.



I am not sure what kind of 'traps' you are looking for.  If I missed any, perhaps others will chime in.
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pieanne  +  181094 Tue, 10 Jan 06 02:38 PM

Shouldn't it be in my hometown, in 1?

And in 5, the word order could be different, to make the sentence easier: "Yesterday at 2, I took a taxi from the airport to my hotel in the center of HCM City".

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Chief Cook  +  181096 Tue, 10 Jan 06 02:40 PM

Just one suggestion:

7. Last Tuesday she wanted to eat at a restaurant but she didn't have any money.

or

7. She wanted to eat at a restaurant last Tuesday but she didn't have any money.

 

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CalifJim  +  181420 Wed, 11 Jan 06 06:50 AM
This one attracted my attention immediately.  Can you explain what you think 'villages' means?  Is it something to eat?  Is it some kind of game?  I'm puzzled.

I bought some villages yesterday at my hometown.


CJ

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