Some players that don’t have strong willpower can call for help. like Parents and friends are a good source for help. Parents and friends are very helpful to players who don’t have strong willpower because they can remind players when they play game too much. Also, parents and friends can give gamers a lot of method to help them quit the game. Sometimes, one person it  is not easy for a gamer to quit without help. Because long period play MMORPG (What is this? You must tell us what this is before you abbreviate it.), it already stick into their mind. becomes ingrained in the gamers mind and it is hard for them to re-enter reality.  (I'm not sure if this is what you are trying to say. I took a guess.)

         High level addiction to MMORPG can cause players lose their personal willpower, and they wouldn’t  won't listen to their parents or friends. The reason is that their personal psychological already has problems. If themselves they or parents feel are concerned about it, they may have to go to see a psychologist or psychiatrist. they A psychologist or psychiatrist can help players analyze their addiction level. They will depend on the addiction level to help person who are addict, The psychologist or psychiatrist will determine the addiction level and treat the gamer accordingly.  Also, they will explain all (No, not all, there is too much information to explain it all.) the informations (There is no plural of information.  Also, explaining implies information so leave out that word.) about addiction to player and tell teach them how to control themselves.  

         In conclusion, nowadays MMORPG became is becoming more and more popular. Parents may need to take serious action about their child's play MMORPG playing.  If person who want to play games, just don’t don't just play MMORPG games because don’t it doesn't matter how you powerful you are in the game, at the last in the end you will give up the game. and A few days or months later you may go back and play the game again or choose another MMORPG, that is a very the horrible effect of addiction. effect.  Also, ("Finally," is a better choice for the conclusion.)players should know that the better best way to get their out of the game is to quit the game as early as they can.

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An interesting thing about this video: stop it at 6:44 and take a look at the top right hand corner of the blackboard, the sentense says "everyone knows what your talking about"

It seems to me that perhaps for some native speakers to draw a distinction between "your" and "you're" is about as difficult as for us, learners, to draw a distiction between "a" "the" and "zero article" ))

BTW, this vid is only the tip of the iceberg, it deals with a very simple facet of the articles in English. The main obstacle is that for a great many cases there's no rule whatsoever that would govern them, and learners just have to learn these cases by heart (I file fixed expressions/idioms under this category)

Giveing up the MMORPG sometimes it is easy, but sometime is extremely hard, like drug. The severity of addiction depends on a player’s personal willpower. For example, people who have strong willpower can give up drugs by themselves; they don’t need any machines or any people help. They want to quit and they simple quit. For example, like most pot somkers can quit by themselves. “Dr. Laura - the founder of Willpower Plus has personally used these very techniques to stop smoking” (How and Why does WillPowerPLUS+ Work?).

         Some players that don’t have strong willpower can call for help. Parents and friends are a good source for help. Parents and friends are very helpful to players who don’t have strong willpower because they can remind players when they play game too much. Also, parents and friends can give gamers a lot of methods to help them quit the game. Sometimes, it is not easy for a gamer to quit without help. Because long period play MMORPG, it becomes ingrained in the gamers mind and it is hard for them to re-enter reality.

         High level addiction to MMORPG can cause player lose their personal willpower, and they won’t listen to their parents or friends. The reason is that their personal psychological already has problems. If they or parents are concerned about it, they may have to go to see a psychologist or psychiatrist. A psychologist or psychiatrist can help player analyze their addiction level. The psychologist or psychiatrist will determine the addiction level and treat the gamer accordingly. Also, they will explain about addiction to player and teach them how to control themselves.       

         In conclusion, nowadays MMORPG is becoming more and more popular. Parents may need to take serious action about their child’s play MMORPG playing.  If person who want to play games, don’t just play MMORPG game because it doesn’t matter how powerful you are in the game, in the end you will give up the game. A few days or months later you may go back and play the game again or choose another MMORPG, which is the horrible effect of addiction. Finally, players should know that the best way to get out of the game is to quit the game as early as they can.