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Creativeguru  #490159  Tue, 18 Mar 08 05:21 AM

At night as soon as I reach home after work I crawl onto the bed and retire for the day.

 

No sooner did i reach home from work I crawl into bed and retire for the day  

  
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New2grammar  #490161  Tue, 18 Mar 08 05:28 AM

I would prefer 'crawl into bed'. I'm 99 percent sure that the definitely article shouldn't be inserted before 'bed' in the context of sleeping.

What about 'When I come home from work..."?

  
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Creativeguru  #490163  Tue, 18 Mar 08 05:41 AM

Ya I do agree taht article shall be omited here, but i alway struggles with the usage of preposition it should be into or onto, and indeed I come home from work also sounds good.

Is my both sentences structure is correct?

Please guide me

  
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