Hi there,
My teacher gave me comments on my essay. Below are his comments:
This letter was obviously written with the rules of letter structure and paragraphing in mind. It is clearly laid out and well-organised. The paragraphs are balanced and of rougly equal length.
I don't understand why my teacher used past tense in the first sentence whereas present tenses in the second and third sentence. Is it a mistake of tense inconsistency?
simon