Hi all,
This is my first post, and i really hope someone can help me here.
I was writing this piece, when it suddenly struck me that there seems to be little tense consistency in my writing.
For example, consider this (just a contrived piece):
"Nick
sat down,
thinking about all that had happened,
wondering where it would take him,
wondering if it made any sense to stay any longer. He
took out his cellphone and
began dialing a number, even as a million doubts
assaulted him. A loud song blared out from the speakers but he didn't take note..."
I've bolded the areas where I feel the conflicts occur. It really sounds alright, but does it comply to conventional English grammar. I mean, is it alright, or should I be doing something differently here.
I would be really grateful to anyone who could explain the rightness/wrongness of this style. I just can't seem to be able to make sense out of it.
Thanks in advance.