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Anonymous  #129984  Tue, 23 Aug 05 04:06 PM

Hello there,

I want to say 'Profitability of company A is lower than profitability of its peers'. The second 'profitability' is redundant so is it correct to say:

'Profitability of company A is lower than its peers'?

Will it have the same meaning as the original sentense?

 

Thank you

  
davkett  #130281  Wed, 24 Aug 05 02:15 PM

How's this?--

'Company A's profitability is lower than that of its peers.'

 

 

  
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goldmund  #130282  Wed, 24 Aug 05 02:17 PM

Dear sir,

You may say «A is less profitable than B».

Kind regards, Smile [:)]

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