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#68013 Sun, 16 Jan 05 04:54 PM

HI
I don't know how to revise these sentences. Can you give me a hand with these. Thank you for your help.

To travel by train or subway ismuch more convenient than by cars.

The less transportation we take, the more exhaust and pollutant the environment has.

The aim is to intergrate both theories and practical experiences into a cost-effective to boost agricultural produce's harvest.

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#68083 Sun, 16 Jan 05 11:16 PM

Traveling by train or subway is much more convenient than traveling by car.

The MORE transportation we take, the more exhaust and pollutants are released into the environment.

The aim is to integrate theories and practical experiences into a cost-effective [SOMETHING MISSING HERE: method? plan?] to boost the yield of agricultural [ produce / harvests].

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