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New2grammar  #543040  Fri, 18 Jul 08 01:07 PM
Picture four 7 foot men stacked on top of one another. The highest person waves his right hand.

Is the above correct?
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Grammar Geek  #543045  Fri, 18 Jul 08 01:41 PM

You need 7-foot.

However, I"m not sure what you mean by "stacked." Are they each standing on the shoulders of the person below? Stacked sounds like they are perhaps lying on top of each other, like fire wood.

I'd also say "The person on top is waving his right hand." The person on top, not The highest person.

  
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New2grammar  #543053  Fri, 18 Jul 08 01:51 PM
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Are they each standing on the shoulders of the person below?
I meant this. Is there a simpler way to say this? vertically stacked?



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The person on top, not The highest person
Thank you, GG. How about the person on the top? Is that acceptable?
  
Grammar Geek  #543137  Fri, 18 Jul 08 05:22 PM

No, don't use "stacked" at all. That sounds like someone else placed them there. I suppose if they were toy soldiers, you can say that the child stacked them one atop the other, but people are not stacked by another person.

 Four 7-foot men formed a human tower, each standing on the shoulders of the one below, and the one at the top/on top, waved from 28 feet up in the air.

  
New2grammar  #543140  Fri, 18 Jul 08 05:27 PM
Thank you, GG. It's long enough to confuse my brain that I need to carefully word them.
  
CalifJim  #543141  Fri, 18 Jul 08 05:28 PM
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28 feet
Not quite!  About three times the average distance from the shoulder to the top of the head has to be subtracted!  I'd estimate 25 feet 6 inches.  Geeked

 Big Smile

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New2grammar  #543145  Fri, 18 Jul 08 05:32 PM
It's compensated by the arm extended above the head (:D) Big Smile  The arm must be quite long.
  
Grammar Geek  #543218  Fri, 18 Jul 08 09:05 PM

I usually wave with my hand at about the level of my face, I think. Although, I may extend my hand way up over my head in a case like that, so it could be from 30 feet if that fellow did the same.

By the way, I have an errant comma in my post. Can you find it?

  
New2grammar  #543233  Fri, 18 Jul 08 10:45 PM
the one at the top/on top, waved from 28 feet up in the air.

Those who always check my writings know that I suck at commas. Anyway, I think this comma is not needed.


  
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