ayumiyoshi1314  +  594514 Tue, 25 Nov 08 06:16 PM The Lion!! Lion waits, watches, creeps as his prey stays fast asleep Quiet, slow that lion does go not to awake his prized sleeping peep Then he jumps! Cuts through the air, silently His prey unaware the dinner he will be How do you like my poem?? Tell me! ayumiyoshi1314 Joined on Tue, Nov 18 2008 Chiba, Japan New Member 46

	Grammar Geek  +  594712 Tue, 25 Nov 08 09:43 PM This is what I think of when I think of peeps.   Grammar Geek Joined on Tue, Jan 10 2006 Veteran Member 19,681 Barbara, who answers in American English. My housekeeping skills attest to the truth of the second law of thermodynamics: Left to themselves, things get more and more random! Images

	reckless_waltz  +  597538 Fri, 28 Nov 08 09:22 AM Im not very good at poetry but i'll give it a try: The Lion!! Lion waits, watches, creeps as his prey stays(lies?) fast asleep Quiet, slow that(the) lion does go not(???) to awake his prized sleeping peep(what does it mean?) Then he jumps! Cuts through the air, silently His prey unaware the dinner he will be Ok, my version: The Lion The Lion waits and watches his prey as it lies fast asleep, Slowly and quietly, he creeps so as not to awake his prized meal, Then he jumps, swoosh.. cutting through the air like a blade, His prey still sleeping, unaware of the dinner he has become!! reckless_waltz Joined on Sat, Nov 1 2008 New Member 36

	ayumiyoshi1314  +  597743 Fri, 28 Nov 08 02:48 PM I love your version of my poem except for the meal part. What means prey or meal but rhymes with creep and asleep? Thank you for helping me though!! ayumiyoshi1314

	Kooyeen  +  602674 Tue, 02 Dec 08 10:24 PM The lion waits, thinks, Will his girl tell him he stinks? As his self-confidence crumbles away, he waits, thinks and pray, pray his girl will have pity in his bathroom there was no TP, he left in a hurry, God help him, a bit stinky. I am sorry, I got totally crazy, and I made that up. I have serious problems, I know. But I kind of liked it. Notice how "pray" reminds you of "prey" too... That's pure art, isn't it? I am gonna get famous, I feel it. Gonna make a few thousand bucks out of it, oh yeah. PS: Of course that "TP" was supposed to be pronounced with the stress on the first syllable, the T...  TEEpee. Like Beavis pronounces it. Kooyeen Joined on Thu, Dec 22 2005 Italy Senior Member 4,978 Parental Advisory / Explicit Posts