alc24

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and one more thing

 

which would you say

 

• People who wear skirts in/during the winter

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Both are fine.

This is not a complete sentence.

alc24

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• As our TV show was rated PG, we had to make it suspenseful, explicit while keepng it within limit and confining the scenes to specific areas and making the scenes as hard and explicit as the limits allowed

 

(since the network beforehand said that this show would be PG, the writer had to do what's stated in the above sentence, if its not grammatically correct then how would you fix it)

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In your part of the world, TV shows have a rating do they? You could say:

"The network required the show to be PG-rated, so we tried to make it as suspenseful and realistic as possible while keeping within those limits."

I don't understand what you mean by "confining the scenes to specific areas" well enough to suggest an alternative. It seems too vague. What sort of "areas" do you have in mind?

"making the scenes as hard and explicit as the limits allowed" doesn't seem to say anything more than what's already been said, and I definitely would not use the words "hard and explicit" other than for pornography.

alc24

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• Since our show is confined to a specific audience, we have to keep the violence to a minimum/keep the viloence down

 

does it sound right with the ending i added, or how would you say it

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You could say:

"Since our show is aimed at a younger audience, we have to keep the violence to a minimum."

I assume that the "specific audience" you mention is a younger audience. If not then replace "younger audience" with a description of the type of audience. "specific audience" seems too vague.

alc24

“Respecting the confines of the show, we decided to make it as violent as possible within or limits     (if its in context and you know what I'm talking about than could you say this, and is CONFINES a noun too or only a verb)”

If it's clear from context that "confines" refers to the type of audience, then "confines" is possible I suppose but doesn't seem the best way to put it. There's no problem with "confines" being a noun, it just doesn't fit very well here IMO.

The second problem is with "respecting", which suggests moderation and does not seem to work with "make it as violent as possible". You could say:

"Bearing in mind the target audience, we decided to make it as violent as possible within our limits."

This does not sound very pleasant, however. It seems particularly inappropriate if the target audience is a younger audience.

alc24

“thank a lot, the sentences sound a lot, now one other thing i want to know is if in number 2

 

Since our show is confined to a specific audience, we have to keep the violence to a minimum/keep the viloence down

 

you can't at all use CONFINE in that sentence ? as in is confined to a younger audience???

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If the show has been running for some time, and you know that it's exclusively (or almost exclusively) watched by a certain audience, then "confined" is fine. However, from the general context I assumed that this was a new show, and that you were merely expecting orintending the audience to be of a certain type. In that case, to say it "is confined" does not seem quite so good to me, and something like "aimed", "targeted" or "intended" seems better.