the original sentence is
1.The Public Rooms of city of Bath can give you a chance - and I really don't know where the mistake is ! Maybe can - could
4.held
6.piece - Maybe I confused myself with a great number because I think that a number means many but after deep thinking I understand that it maybe wrong !
7.How can I be so stupid !!! It must be stage of course :(
8. has time ! It seems easy when somebody show it to you !
9. live music - ok ! to be quite frank I must admit that I havn't heard about such music. Could you explain what means live music - maybe music which is singed alive ?
12. once replace 'a' but I couldn't see it . How pity.
thank you very much !