Are these sentences grammatical? And if not, could you rewrite for me or explain what’s wrong inside? Please : )
After the inauguration, I saw the new elected mayor lying inside his new office in proneness with a dagger pierced through his throat, many people guess that it might be done by his new hired porter.
On my way home I saw 4 porters moved the coronation coach, showing sharp malice from their eyes.
I got into the habit of treating racist with tremendous malice when I once saw a racist stepped over a prone black infant.