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Latest post Mon, Oct 19 2009 7:08 AM by Quangtrungvtv. 2 replies.
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Quangtrungvtv  +  946684 Mon, 19 Oct 09 04:55 AM
last year I was so happy with my lover, Now I feel so sad, oh I am lonly , she was going far away, she went with her friend
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Le Quang Trung I love English very much, but I'm not proficient. Please help me to correct the grammar of the sentences above. Thank you very much!
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dimsumexpress  +  946711 Mon, 19 Oct 09 05:32 AM
It's basically ok but we can put a few touches on it to make it flow better.

I was very happy with someone I love last year. Now, she has gone far way with her friend, leaving me feeling so sad and lonely.
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Quangtrungvtv  +  946775 Mon, 19 Oct 09 07:08 AM
Now when she hear my calling,but don't know story ,what should I do? I think I will forget  ....
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