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Latest post Fri, Jan 6 2006 12:44 AM by MrPedantic. 1 replies.
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Spring  +  179520 Fri, 06 Jan 06 12:36 AM

Could you please check my sentences if they are grammatically correct, if  I used the right vocabulary, and if I may use (-) in the first two sentences?

There is so much truth in your statement - thinking happy thoughts has the power to counteract sad thoughts.

Your letter had magic powers on me - it mitigated my pain and lifted up my spirits.

My favourity food is pancakes spread with honey and heaped up wiht strawberries, blueberries, and blackberries.

Thank you

Hope

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MrPedantic  +  179522 Fri, 06 Jan 06 12:44 AM

Hello Spring

I'd say:

1. There is so much truth in your statement - thinking happy thoughts has the power to counteract sad thoughts. ] Fine.

2. Your letter had a magical effect on me - it mitigated my pain and lifted up my spirits.

3. My favourite food is pancakes spread with honey and heaped (up) with strawberries, blueberries, and blackberries.

MrP

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