"...to become a painter"

   Share on Facebook  
Peaceblinkfriend  #544580  Mon, 21 Jul 08 05:13 PM
I wanted to become a painter

I wanted to become a painter once

I had wanted to become a painter

I had wanted to become a painter once

I used to want to become a painter.


Do they all mean the same thing? And do they sound like natural English to you?


Thank you

PBF
  
Top 75 Contributor
Joined on Wed, May 9 2007
Australia
Contributing Member (1,572)
Clive  #544585  Mon, 21 Jul 08 05:25 PM
Hi,
Let me begin by asking you to consider a couple of simpler examples.

I wanted to cook dinner.

I had wanted to cook dinner.

Do you understand the difference between these tenses?

Best wishes, Clive
  
Top 10 Contributor
Joined on Thu, Oct 28 2004
Canada
Veteran Member (21,191)
ModeratorTeachers
El tango argentino es un pensamiento triste que se puede bailar (The tango argentino is a sad thought which can be danced) Enrique Santos Discépolo
Peaceblinkfriend  #544876  Tue, 22 Jul 08 07:25 AM
I wanted to cook dinner. I had the desire to cook dinner some time in the past.

I had wanted to cook dinner. I had the desire to cook dinner a long time ago.

Is this the difference between the two sentences?


Thanks


PBF
  
CalifJim  #544880  Tue, 22 Jul 08 08:02 AM
Peaceblinkfriend
Do they all mean the same thing?
Adding "once" doesn't change the meaning, but changing the tense does.

Peaceblinkfriend
do they sound like natural English to you?
Yes, except the last one, which seems awkward to me.

CJ 

  
Top 10 Contributor
Joined on Mon, Aug 2 2004
California
Veteran Member (16,975)
ModeratorProficient Speaker
"There are no facts, only interpretations" - Nietzsche
Clive  #545022  Tue, 22 Jul 08 03:00 PM

Hi,

I wanted to cook dinner. I had the desire to cook dinner some time in the past. Yes.

I had wanted to cook dinner. I had the desire to cook dinner a long time ago.     No. The distance in the past is not important. The Past Perfect is used to show that an event happened in the past before some other event or point in the past
eg  At 7pm yesterday, I cooked dinner. I started to cook at 7pm.
eg At 7pm yesterday, I had cooked dinner. Dinner was ready by 7pm.

Now let's look at a few of your original examples.

I wanted to become a painter. OK. tells me about a past desire.

I had wanted to become a painter. You need to say this in a context where it is before some other time in the past.

eg After I graduated from college, I got a job as an accountant. I had wanted to become a painter, but I discovered that I had no talent. This tells about a desire that I had before I graduated from college.

So, you need to study and practice Past Perfect. Would you like to try to write and post a few sentences for us to comment on?
Best wishes, Clive

  
Peaceblinkfriend  #545483  Wed, 23 Jul 08 03:14 PM
Thanks for replying, CalifJim and Clive.

I will certainly heed your advice and work on Past Perfect. (:)) Smile

Would 'I wanted to become a painter' be a strong enough utterance to accentuate the fact that 'I' no longer want to become a painter? If not, could you suggest what I should say to make that emphasis?


Thanks again


PBF
  
New2grammar  #545488  Wed, 23 Jul 08 03:19 PM
Peaceblinkfriend
Would 'I wanted to become a painter' be a strong enough utterance to accentuate the fact that 'I' no longer want to become a painter?


I don't think so. Unless the context makes it clear. You could say, I always wanted to become a painter but then I grew up and realized it wouldn't make a good living so I went to medical school and now I'm darn rich.
  
Top 10 Contributor
Joined on Tue, Nov 21 2006
Veteran Member (7,670)
Who wants to go sailing around the world with me?
Clive  #545492  Wed, 23 Jul 08 03:29 PM
Hi,
You could say 'I used to want to become a painter'.
Clive
  
AddThis Feed Button RSS Feed: ESL General English Grammar Questions
© 2008 MediaCET Ltd.
Terms and Conditions & Terms of Service