Hi teachers,
Could you please help edit my sentences below?:
1/ " In my country, when a person comes to the age of 15 ,he must go to the Social Order and Administration Management Police Office where police will take a picture of him or her and fingerprint him or her ,and then they will give him or her an appointment note which tells him or her the date to come back to get an identification card ."
2/Yesterday my mom took me to the Social Order and Administration Management Police Office to do an ID card.
3/ Tomorrow his mother will go the ward people's committe to do a birth certificate for her newly-born child
Thank you in advance