Hi,
Can you please, take a look at these sentences and see if they are right?
-"Travelling by car? No way! This place is very far. Why not take a jet flight or book a first-class flight once you want to trifle away your money?
- Oh, stop with this kind of talk,please. It won't take us anywhere"
Here are some comments.
1. It sounds to me like you mean 'if' instead of 'once'.
2. Where I live, most people who fly take a jet flight.so the term 'jet flight' seems a little quaint. I would omit it.
3. Instead of 'trifle', I'd say 'fritter'.
4. The overall meaning sounds like the speaker thinks it would be good to fly, yet the term 'trifle' (fritter) seems to suggest that flying is not a good idea. These two things seem to contradict each other.
Best wishes, Clive