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HBK4LIFE
#61684 Wed, 15 Dec 04 09:16 PM
As the burning in my heart goes on and on...i hope the taunting will soon be gone...or else i will soon snap...and then back again on daddies lap...will it ever ever end?...if it dosent the message i send...will they think im insane...will my sacrifices be in vain?...stop beckoning with death...or else comes the day of reckoning..........
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anita_a
#61709 Thu, 16 Dec 04 12:21 AM
Hey why don't u post it in the form of a poem
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JohnDoe
#62928 Wed, 22 Dec 04 06:11 PM
As the burning in my heart goes on and on...
i hope the taunting will soon be gone...
or else i will soon snap...
and then back again on daddies lap...
will it ever ever end?...
if it dosent the message i send...
will they think im insane...
will my sacrifices be in vain?...
stop beckoning with death...
or else comes the day of reckoning..........
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anita_a
#62935 Wed, 22 Dec 04 06:53 PM
That's good.
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maj
#63045 Thu, 23 Dec 04 10:08 AM
Sorry for the harm I caused you
I'll be waiting for the day to finish
I'll want to sooth your pain with my tears
Your pain lives in me.
Sorry for not holding you tight then
I'll be waiting for you endlessly tonight
Your brain lives in me.
Sorry for not listening to your wispers
you were always there I did not take you in
Your soul is my home.
Let me know when it hurts
Let show the uneasy vibrations
Let me take care of your sensations
I only have a flower to offer
How can I amend your day?
Strange isn't it?
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