sasako  +  575280 Fri, 10 Oct 08 10:29 PM Good evening, could you please tell me if the following sentence is correct? Or is there a way to experss otherwise what is expressed in it? In the German hunting system, there are shooting preserves where licensed hunters can lease the hunting rights.   Thank you sasako sasako Joined on Thu, Oct 9 2008 New Member 07

	RayH  +  575284 Fri, 10 Oct 08 10:47 PM sasako “In the German hunting system, there are shooting preserves where licensed hunters can lease the hunting rights.” Not substantially better than your version but less wordy and more natural sounding to my ear. In Germany there are preserves where licensed hunters can lease the rights. RayH Joined on Sat, Mar 22 2008 Contributing Member 1,555 Native speaker of U. S. English. Not a grammar expert.

	sasako  +  575289 Fri, 10 Oct 08 10:55 PM Thank you very much, I think you´re right, this sounds more naturally. I wanted to put out the difference to other hunting systems, this is why I expressed myself so complicated...but I guess it would be sound better when expressed a little shorter. sasako