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Anonymous  +  963455 Fri, 06 Nov 09 02:46 PM
Hello!

I'm a student in a Business School (1rst year), and english isn't my main language (my lv2 is spanish). Please, do you give me some help and correct me? This is a oral performence.

I will help you in French (i'm french) or spanish, if you need my help.

Thanks for all, :à


This year UNICEF celebrates the 20 years of convention. It has a very influential job and there is a fall of all numbers concerning the ill-treatment of the child in the broad sense since 20 ans



Why is it so important?
To my mind it is very important. Because children are the citizens of tomorrow, the humanity of tomorrow. It is about our job of teacher and child welfare.



Under nutrition (with approximately 5.6 million dead child per year). The Under nutrition contributes to more half of the deaths of children. How to imagine that our ground (world) with food for all? We must transmit this value, it is a history of humanity



Access to education
115 million children who, according to the estimates are not schoolings
Children have the right to an education. to become citizens able to defend themselves



Maltreated childhood
In France, one estimates at 50,000 the number of maltreated children.
In France, the family is the principal person in charge of the acts of ill-treatment on child. Indeed, 51% of the acts of ill-treatment are made by parents
It has direct effects on the children but long-term effects too


Child work
According to UNICEF, 350 million children are concerned in the world; with in particular the worst shapes of child work

United Nations (UNO) currently estimates at 300,000 the number of children soldiers. They are mainly used DURING civil wars, or by paramilitary criminal groups in Colombia or revolutionary movements of guerilla (FARC)
Child prostitution, 150 million in the world, mainly in India Thailand Brazil.

This 2 things create large and deep psychological damage on child.

Doctor D  +  969059 Thu, 12 Nov 09 02:17 AM
Okay, I rewrote this piece, but it was impossible just to correct the grammar.  It was not always clear what point you wished to make.  So I changed the text to make sense to me.  Feel free to correct any misstatement of your ideas.


UNICEF's Anniversary

This year UNICEF celebrates its 20th anniversary. It has been a very influential organization and has brought about a widespread decline in the  number of children, in the broadest sense, being ill-treated since it began its work 20 years ago.


Why is it so important?
To my mind it is very important because children are the citizens of tomorrow, the humanity of tomorrow. UNICEF has long supported us in our role as teachers and child welfare workers.


Undernutrition

Undernutrition contributes to more half of the deaths of children worldwide, with approximately 5.6 million children dying each year. Can we not imagine our world with food for all? We must transmit this dream and make it reality.


Access to education
There are 115 million children who, according to the estimates, are not being schooled. Children have the right to an education so that they may become citizens able to guide themselves.


Maltreated children
In France, one estimate is that there are 50,000 maltreated children.
There, a family member is the principal person who commits acts of ill-treatment on a child. Indeed, 51% of the acts of ill-treatment are made by parents.  This has direct effects on the children but long-term effects too.


Child Labor
According to UNICEF, 350 million children at risk in the world; in particular becasue of the worst forms of child labor.

The United Nations (UNO) currently estimates the number of children soldiers at 300,000. They are mainly used during civil wars, or by paramilitary criminal groups (as in Colombia) or by revolutionary movements of guerillas (such as FARC).
Child prostitution involves some 150 million children worldwide, mainly in India, Thailand, and  Brazil.

These last two things especially create large and deep psychological damage on a child.

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