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Abil  #533195  Fri, 27 Jun 08 05:17 AM
1. He stood in silence with his hands akimbo, looking far off to the horizon.

2. He stood in silence with his hands folded close to his chest.

Are these sentences correct? Is it okay to use a coma in the first sentence? Will the meaning of this sentence change if I drop the coma?

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Clive  #533202  Fri, 27 Jun 08 05:29 AM
Hi,
1. He stood in silence with hishands arms akimbo, looking far off to the horizon.

2. He stood in silence with his hands folded close to his chest.

Are these sentences correct? Yes, except that 'akimbo' focuses on the position of your arms when your hands are on your hips.
Is it okay to use a coma in the first sentence? Yes, use one.
Will the meaning of this sentence change if I drop the coma? It will make it sound like your hands/(arms) are 'looking far off to the horizon'. This is obviously not your intended meaning.(:D) Big Smile

Best wishes, Clive

  
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26TMNTJG2PG  #533204  Fri, 27 Jun 08 05:32 AM
By 'coma', I take it you mean 'comma'.

1. Strictly speaking, the comma is not necessary but quite commonly placed.
    However, it must be there if the sentence is rewritten as
    Looking far off to the horizon, he stood in silence with his hands akimbo. 

Both sentences are correct but the positions of his hands are not the same.
  
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Abil  #533205  Fri, 27 Jun 08 05:41 AM
Obviously, the positions of the hands are not the same. Is it wrong to use "hands" in the first sentence? What is the difference between hands and arms?

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Clive  #533333  Fri, 27 Jun 08 02:42 PM
Hi,
Your hands are on the end of your arms, below your wrists. (:)) Smile

Best wishes, Clive 
  
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