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Two Amazing poems by D.L. Whited

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Longing

She rises up from restless sleep
To greet another day
She wonders if he thought of her
As he started on his way
The first thing on her mind was him
And her love swells like a tide
She always starts her morning out
Wishing he were at her side

She looks up with saddened eyes
To catch a lonely stare
The lost girl in the mirror sighs
And brushes back her hair
For just a brief few moments
She smiles a secret smile
Her finger reaches out to trace
I love you, on the tile

Memories so bitter sweet
Go rushing through her head
Thoughts of how he held her close
As they shared the same soft bed
Music, wine, and candlelight
Making love at break of day
Then the sadness of A brave goodbye
As she slowly walked away

She knew when it all started
Some days would feel this blue
Real love is worth the price you pay
And she knows this one is true
So she pulls herself together
As she whispers out his name
Not knowing many miles away
He's whispering the same.

Parallels

I saw an aging flower today
All alone and slowly dying
A single tear slid down my cheek
I felt better for the crying

There is so much deep inside
That I keep hidden out of sight
Walls of pain that I put up
Built to hide me from the light

Could you take away the hurt
If I reached blindly for your hand
Or would you simply turn away
And not want to understand

So many reasons I hold on
None of which I can explain
But my time will one day end
Like a gentle summer rain

I saw an aging flower today
All alone and slowly dying
A single tear slid down my cheek

I felt better for the crying

All i can say is...WOW
New Member 05
Anonymous:
Wow. I am absolutely stunned. Wow.
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Anonymous:
If you write any further poems, please let me know when do check back on this page. You poems are touching on such an emotional level. You speak with more than your words.
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They're both great...
Senior Member 3,347
Shinichi Okazaki.
Anonymous:
These poems are the best I have read in ages
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Great poems, but is there really a thing called, A Brave Goodbye. As for me, all the farewells are weak !
Kingdom of S.A
Full Member 314
When people choose to live by life's will, fate can do nothing but give in.
Anonymous:
All i can say is...WOW
Anonymous:
This poem is just amazing it shall be cherished by many.
Great poems, but is there really a thing called, A Brave Goodbye. As for me, all the farewells are weak !
Anonymous:
I am so amazed about your parallel poem who old are you
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