1. No, that's not true. Your example is correct and follows the normal rules.
The writing time you are going to have ...
is fine.
It's just difficult to think of situations when that sort of thing is
needed in the course of one's conversation or writing. You have
come up with one, though!
2. The idea is that they are symbols of
a coveted
kind of commercialism,
a kind of commercialism that is coveted. Similarly,
They exhibited a ruthless cruelty.
He experienced the pain of an unrequited love.
CJ