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Anonymous  +  540579 Sun, 13 Jul 08 02:13 AM
Hello,

In formal American prose, which is correct: "...in you and in him" or "...in you and him" Or, another example, which is correct: "...that is based, not on magical categories, but on text and reason" or "that is based, not on magical categories, but text and reason"? Is it better stylistically to omit the preposition prior to the second object?
26TMNTJG2PG  +  540580 Sun, 13 Jul 08 02:47 AM
Is it better stylistically to omit the preposition prior to the second object?

This will depend on your message. If you have a lot of words before that position, you may need to use the second preposition for clarity sake.
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Grammar Geek  +  540593 Sun, 13 Jul 08 03:28 AM

I would certainly use the second "on."

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Philip  +  540594 Sun, 13 Jul 08 03:31 AM
Grammar Geek

I would certainly use the second "on."

For the sake of parallel construction, what follows 'not' should also follow 'but'.  Definitely, on!
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