Hi,
I've literally signed up in the last 5 minutes and I know it may be a bit cheeky to ask for help in my first post, but I really am desperate.
I need to finish off with a few lines for my closing statement, so any tips you can give me for that would go down excellent.
Well, I am applying for a law degree at Universities and I'm not sure whether my personal statement is up to scratch. Here it is and I welcome any suggestions/constructive criticism. I appreciate any kind of reply.
Thanks.
(Oh, im from the UK)
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I
have always been interested in legal comprehension. I'm fascinated by
how legalities control every step in life. About 5 years ago I came
across a law book which my father had kept. This book prompted me to
find out more about the compelling subject. As the years have gone on
I've learnt considerably more but I know that there is still a lot to
learn.
In
A-Level law I have enjoyed studying
strict liability, the homicide act and murder cases because these are
very intriguing areas, with the complexity of cases and various law's
adding to the enjoyment to these sectors of law. I keep up to date
with current affairs and I am a frequent reader of various
broadsheets. I find it compelling to read about precedents set in law
for previous cases and comparing it to more recent ones. I spend two
hours a week in a debate class at my local youth center where we
argue about controversial topics in world news. I believe this has
increased my confidence and allows me to get my viewpoint across to
others in a clear and concise manner.
In
July 2005 I attended work experience at Vauxhall Motors in Leicester.
Here I shadowed administrative staff to learn the in's and out's of
the office. What I gathered from this experience was invaluable. I
learnt how to manage time to reach strict deadlines and targets by
capitalising on existing strengths to my full potential. I improved
my communication skills by talking to other staff in a professional
manner and I learnt how to conduct myself in meetings. I learnt
valuable skills which I’m already finding useful. Last term I spent
two weeks at a solicitors firm. I shadowed a solicitor and I gained
knowledge on how to approach people needing legal advice in a
professional way.
Academically
I am a self motivated student and have a competitive drive therefore
I know a law degree would be most suitable and the consequent
stepping stone in my ambition to practice law as a career. I am a
dedicated and very hardworking student. By going to university I will
be able to explore the areas of law that I haven’t yet come across.
The ability to work in a group and independently is a skill I
possess. I am able to carry out extensive research and identify the
relevant information. University has a lot to offer, with one of the
main ones being the all-encompassing career prospects after the
completion of the degree.
After
completing my degree I want to become a solicitor. I’ve already
researched the career and have clear ideas about where I want to go
after I have obtained a degree. I have researched about what a
solicitor is expected to do, what qualities a solicitor might have
and also information about the sort of salary that a solicitor would
get.
Writing
articles on the British legal system is a great passion of mine. I
have set up a website whereby users can subscribe and receive a
weekly newsletter and general information about the legislative
process, policing powers, various case law and many other similar
topics. I feel that Research in and out of college has helped me set
up this website. I am a regular snooker player and I partake in
regular voluntary work by teaching basic snooker training to children
aged 10-14. Chess is a hobby and I enjoy playing with family. The
level-headedness and patience involved has definitely developed my
analytical skills.