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Latest post Wed, Nov 28 2007 3:36 AM by Grammar Geek. 4 replies.
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Cfvg  +  439947 Wed, 07 Nov 07 06:45 PM

Dear all,

 Please correct grammer this passage

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The economic of Vietnam is strong development, so many companys in Vietnam have more demand to extend business. Most company believe that bulding good storage management is the key building-block towards a good business continuity and desaster recovery plan. So I think storage management industry have many oppotunity to business in Viet Nam market.

Thanks for you help.

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Cfvg, 2 yr ago

please help me!

Feebs11  +  440363 Thu, 08 Nov 07 10:10 PM
 Cfvg wrote:

Dear all,

 Please correct the grammar in this passage

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The economic of Vietnam is strong development, [Vietnam's economy is developing strongly]  so many companies in Vietnam have more demand to extend their business. Most companies believe that building good storage management [management of storage]  is the key building-block towards a good business continuity and disaster recovery plans. So I think the storage management industry has many oppotunity to business in Viet Nam market [opportunities to develop within Vietnam] .

Thanks for your help.

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Anonymous, 1 yr 346 days ago

 Which is the correct grammar in the following:-

I comforted the deceaseds wife upon his death    or

I comforted the decedents wife after his death???

Grammar Geek  +  447209 Wed, 28 Nov 07 03:36 AM
...the deceased's wife
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