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Anonymous  +  385521 Thu, 28 Jun 07 11:34 PM

Greetings everyone!

Could you please correct my Motivation Letter found below:

Dear Sir or Madame,

 

 

My name is ... and I would like to apply for a position of ... that I found on ... website. After I’ve  studied in details duties and requriements that are connected with job of ... I’ve found that I’m interested in this position.

2 years ago I’ve graduated from Latvian Maritime Collage and received my Navigational Officer certificate. I’m currently working as a Third Safety Officer onboard oil tankers and my current duties, besides navigational routine, is organization of onboard crew training according to SOLAS convention and Company requirements. I’m also keep records of all seamen documents and certificates and calculating the salary. I believe that my work expierence at sea and skills will allow me to be successful in the position I’m applying.

After I’ve familiarized myself with sturcture of your Company and have seen few annual reports, I’ve found that [company_name] is one of the leading world class companies that are currently exists and for me it is great opportunity for personal and proffesional growth as also a chance to try myself working ashore.

I’m looking forward for a personal interview to futher discussion of opportunities connected with the positon of .... Thank you for your attention and I hope to see you in the next future.

 

 

Sincerely,

 

My name Smile [:)]

 

 

Thanks lads in advance.

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whl626  +  386187 Sat, 30 Jun 07 10:07 AM

Dear Sir / Madam

My name is .... and I would like to apply for a position as ... that I came across on ... website. After reading in details the requirements of the job. I'm quite interested in the post.

I graduated from Latvian Martime college 2 years ago and received my Natigational Officer certificate. Now I'm working as a Third Safety Officer onboard the oil tanker and my current duty is , besides navigational routine, organizing onboard crew training according to SOLAS convention and Company requirements. I also keep all seamen documents and certificates as well as calculating payroll. I believe that my working experience and skills at the sea will stand me in good stead for the position I try to obtain.

Being familiar with the structure and annual reports of your company, I conclude that your company is a leading world class corporation. So I believe that it is a place which is good for professional growth. Furthermore, I also stand a chance to work ashore.

I'm looking forward to a personal interview.

Thank you for you attention and I hope to see you in the near future

Yours sincerely,

My name

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Thanks alot!
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