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fishcat

#503317 Mon, 21 Apr 08 12:07 PM

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Dear Madam, Re: PURPOSE OF RENTING THE PROMOTION SPACE NEAR ESCALATOR FRONTAGE IN RIVERSIDE SHOPPING COMPLEX IN LONG TERM.

Refer to the above matter, we are interested to rent the promotion space near Escalator Frontage, Lower Ground Floor in Riverside Shopping Complex from Jun 2008 until end of December 2008. We hope that the rental of this promotion can be lower that RM 200.00 per day. Furthermore we hope that can get your reply as soon as possible. Do have any doubt please contact Mr. Lo at 016-8112205.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank You.

Yours Faithfully,

fishcat

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#503320 Mon, 21 Apr 08 12:34 PM

Dear Madam, Re: RENTING THE PROMOTION SPACE NEAR ESCALATOR FRONTAGE IN RIVERSIDE SHOPPING COMPLEX IN THE LONG TERM.

With reference to the above matter, we are interested in renting the promotion space near the Escalator Frontage, Lower Ground Floor in Riverside Shopping Complex from June 2008 until the end of December 2008. We hope that the rental of this space will be less than RM 200.00 per day. Furthermore we hope that can get your reply as soon as possible. If you have any queries please contact Mr. Lo on 016-8112205.

I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank You.

Yours Faithfully,