Urgent..help with letter of motivation

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Taida  #457765  Fri, 28 Dec 07 08:39 AM
Please can you check  my motivation letter i have to finish it in next few days...
Thank you in advance

Please accept this letter as an expression of my strong interest to enter the Masters program in the field of information systems.

My aim is to work and conduct research within the Information Technology industry. I would therefore like to gain a deeper theoretical knowledge in Information Systems and Computer Science. I am passionate about informatics and information technologies, following technological developments and seeing their implications. A master's degree will give me the up-to-date tools and knowledge to be competitive and competent.

In June 2007 I will graduate from the Sarajevo School of Science and Technology (SSST), first private, English speaking university in Bosnia and Herzegovina, majoring in Information Systems. I will receive a dual degree from the University of Buckingham in the United Kingdom and SSST.

 

While pursuing my degree I have worked on many group projects related to IS. Some of them are design and implementation of database for art gallery (SQL), creating computer animations (Maya), conducting a data mining project using a data mining software tool (Weka), implementation of online book store(PHP, HTML). These projects, as well as all other, were strictly limited in time, with tight deadlines. However I have showed the ability to work under pressure and produce satisfying results.

 

I conducted my student practice on development of dynamic web pages within “Djikic Software Development” company. I was working with scripting engine and CGI program WhizBase. Further on, I am now working on the graduation project under supervision of Prof. Amer Kadic and in cooperation with MIM corporation. The project consists of design and implementation of order management system which will be built after an extensive research on major order management systems, as well as on the specific requests made and compiled by the customers and IT personnel. Technology involved is substantial Oracle SQL programming, some Oracle PL/SQL programming and advanced Cold Fusion web programming.

Both my academic and work experience have prepared me well for a career in Information Systems. I am a motivated and ambitious person, and I like to accomplish tasks as thoroughly and effectively as possible.  I am wiling to adjust to a new culture and to overcome obstacles.


Thank you in advance for taking the time to consider my application. I look forward to hearing from you soon. For any additional information please do not hesitate to contact me.

Sincerely,



  
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Verade  #458891  Mon, 31 Dec 07 05:54 PM
"...strong desire to enter...," or, "...strong interest in entering... field of Information Systems."

"...(SSST), the first private English..."

"Some of them are: designing and implementing the database for an art gallery (SQL), ..., and implementing [or, creating?] an online bookstore..."

"These projects were strictly limited in time...; however I have shown..."

"...within the Djikic Software Development company."

"...working with the scripting..."

"Currently I am working on my Graduation Project under the supervision..."

"...of the design and implementation of an order...after extensive research..."

"The technology involved is..."

"I am eager to immerse myself in a new culture..."

[Good luck with you letter Taida! Your English is very good.]





  
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