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Damny  +  790981 Mon, 22 Jun 09 11:07 PM
Hello guys,

My native language is Arabic and the second one is french. I can communicate in english, I mean I can let people know what I want to tell them and understand them too.

I'm up to have my degree this year and I have to make a CV about my self.

I found an exemple of this but I have some problems with to detail my role in every position I got.

Some one can suggest something ?

Here is the text :


Job 1 :

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In charge of assisting the responsible of fairs, the exploration of exhibitors for several projects, International Fair of Algiers 2009, SIMEM'09.

Information and guidance of visitors during fairs on our stand.


Job 2 :

Buying and selling online entertainment ticketing.
Exploration business through phoning from committees and ticketing agencies worldwide.

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Job 3 :

Enriching the customer portfolio and monitoring projects underway.


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Job 4 :

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Diversify and improve our services to our customers.
Exploration market to new businesses.


Someone can tell me what I have to replace and what remove ect ...

Thank you very much guys.


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AlpheccaStars  +  791105 Tue, 23 Jun 09 01:16 AM
Hi Damny, and welcome to the Forums.


Your posting is so messed up with all the mark-up text that it is hard to read. Could you post it again? (Hint: Copy and paste from Notepad, not from your word processor)

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Damny  +  791861 Tue, 23 Jun 09 01:31 PM
Job 1 :

In charge of assisting the responsible of fairs, the exploration of exhibitors for several projects, International Fair of Algiers 2009, SIMEM'09.
Information and guidance of visitors during fairs on our stand.

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Job 2 :

 

Buying and selling online entertainment ticketing.

Exploration business through phoning from committees and ticketing agencies worldwide.

 

Job 3 :

 

Enriching the customer portfolio and monitoring projects underway.

 

Job 4 :

 

Diversify and improve our services to our customers.

Exploration market to new businesses.

Damny  +  791864 Tue, 23 Jun 09 01:32 PM
I don't know what happened :(
AlpheccaStars  +  791979 Tue, 23 Jun 09 03:19 PM
Hi Damny:


I found your CV difficult to understand. Please see the comments on your posting.


All the best,

A-s


Damny


Job 1 : (Instead of Job 1, say: Experience:  and list the dates - 2007-present; 2005-2007, etc.)


In charge of assisting the responsible of fairs, the exploration of exhibitors for several projects, International Fair of Algiers 2009, SIMEM'09.

It is difficult to understand what you actually did for each job. Here are my interpretations, but they might not be correct...

I assisted the director of exhibition production in various projects: Internation Fair of Algiers 2009 and SIMEM '09 (please spell this out).

I recruited exhibitors and developed visitor information brochures for our booth.


Information and guidance of visitors during fairs on our stand.


Job 2 :

 

Buying and selling online entertainment ticketing.

Exploration business through phoning from committees and ticketing agencies worldwide.

 

I was in a business that bought and sold tickets online for entertainment events. I coordinated existing ticketing agencies and developed additional sales channels and event sponsors as the source of large blocks of tickets.


Job 3 :

 

Enriching the customer portfolio and monitoring projects underway.

I don't understand this one - a portfolio of art? an investment portfolio?

 

Job 4 :

 

Diversify and improve our services to our customers. I don't understand what services you improved, and what new services you added.


Exploration market to new businesses.

Damny  +  792074 Tue, 23 Jun 09 04:22 PM
Thank you for your response.

Then,

Job 1 :

I assisted the person charged of fairs here in Algiers, not the director, because the director is in Paris, and she is her representative if you want.

SIMEM'09 is : International exhibition of medicines and medical equipment.

I recuited exhibitors is ok. 

And the last mission, you know during fairs we have a stand, then I have to stay in the stand and inform people and guide them to X or Y company in the fair (To the stand of the company).


Job 2:

 It's exactly what I did there.


Job 3:

I'd better use database (client database), cause i was charged of find new client and but them in the company data base (make business with them).


Job 4:

I was in a local company like FEDEX, but local one, I had to find new clients to the company using messenger service ( when they have to send something, somewhere they call and I send to them a messenger) If you want I was in contracts.


Hope it's clear better then the 1st post.

Thank you for your help.

AlpheccaStars  +  792263 Tue, 23 Jun 09 07:06 PM
Damny
“Thank you for your response.

Then,

Job 1 :

I assisted the person in charge charged of fairs here in Algiers, not the director, because the director is in Paris, and she is her representative if you want.

SIMEM'09 is : International exhibition of medicines and medical equipment.

I recuited exhibitors is ok. 

And the last mission, you know during fairs we have a stand, then I have to stay in the stand and inform people and guide them to X or Y company in the fair (To the stand of the company). Now I understand!  You worked at the ehibition's information desk, assisting the visitors in finding their way around.


Job 2:

 It's exactly what I did there.


Job 3:

I'd better use database (client database), cause i was charged of find new client and but them in the company data base (make business with them). OK.  Here is what I understand:  You used the company's list of prospects to find new clients and establish new business relationships.


Job 4:

I was in a local company like FEDEX, but local one, I had to find new clients to the company using messenger service ( when they have to send something, somewhere they call and I send to them a messenger) If you want I was in contracts.

OK Here is what I understand: You worked for a local delivery service in finding new regular long-term clients for the service.

Hope it's clear better than the 1st post.

Thank you for your help.

optilang  +  792279 Tue, 23 Jun 09 07:22 PM
Hi

AlpheccaStars
“I recuited exhibitors is ok. ”

If I understand this properly it means that you helped to sell exhibition space to exhibitors.

So you worked for the 'Organiser' of exhibitions in Algiers. During the exhibitions/fairs you were present on the 'Organiser's stand' in order to assist visitors. No doubt you also dealt with any requests or problems of your exhibitors during the exhibition too.
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Damny  +  792323 Tue, 23 Jun 09 08:04 PM
Thank you guys for all what you do for me.

Here is more information :


Job 1 :

I work in the organizer office during the organization of the event, I participate in the organization in general and during fairs i'm on the stand to assist people and exhibitors.

Quote of Optilang :

"If I understand this properly it means that you helped to sell exhibition space to exhibitors.
So you worked for the 'Organiser' of exhibitions in Algiers. During the exhibitions/fairs you were present on the 'Organiser's stand' in order to assist visitors. No doubt you also dealt with any requests or problems of your exhibitors during the exhibition too."

Exactly that, in addition of my job at the office.

Thank's optilang.

Job 3 :

I was in charge to enlarge the prospects list and at the same time find new clients for the company.


Job 4:

It's exactly that.


Now what I can say ?






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