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Anonymous  #313562  Wed, 10 Jan 07 07:01 PM

Well, my paper is due in about 3 and half hours!  I haven't time to cite my sources, but I need to you guys to read my paper so I can change my sentence structure and style or I would have a bad grade on this paper.  Don't worry about grammer!

Here is my almost finished paper and please help me out!  Note:It doesn't have a conclusion and there are more argumentsfor me to write!

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Binh Bui

 

Mrs. Wallenberg

 

Advanced English 12/Hour 2

 

10 January 2007

 

Genetic Engineering Is the Next Step in Evolution

 

Henry I. Miller, a researcher at the Hoover Institution and Gregory Conko, director of

 

food safety policy at the Competitive Enterprise Institute, they both claim that genetic

 

engineering has the ability to obtain results in improvements in agriculture and in life-saving

 

medicines.  They disagree with accusations that are cipher those products that are genetically

 

engineered that threat children’s health which discourage the use of these products that could

 

actually save children’s lives.  There are always people who are skeptic about the consequences

 

provided by genetic engineering unless there are more people that can influence others about the

 

benefits of genetic engineering.  The benefits of genetic engineering that it has to offer should not

 

be impede just because of some special-interest groups out there are using it as a scapegoat for

 

their own ethnical issue.

 

According to Ron Epstein, a research professor at the Institute for World Religions in

 

Berkeley, California, he believed that the long-term negative effects of genetic engineering

 

exceed the short-term benefits it has to offer.  It is a fact that genetic engineering does not poses

 

a threat to mankind just because modification of organisms at the basic genetic level existed for

 

at least back to 6000 BC when the Babylonians used microorganisms in the process of

 

fermentation to brew alcoholic beverages and there are many scientific bodies, including the

 

World Health Organization, U.S. National Academy of Sciences, have studied on modern

 

biotechnology and arrived at conclusions that they are safe. 

 


 

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Many skeptics, including Ron Epstein, believes that genetic engineering is a threat to the

 

environment and human because of genetically engineered pathogens that either be use in

 

biowarfare, recombined in a toxic form from harmless, rapidly mutating engineered organisms,

 

or release into the environment by accident.  In reality, there are no effective means of

 

transportation to deliver mutated pathogens to be used as biological weapons and there was a

 

Japanese terrorist group that interested a lot of money into making deadly pathogens with no

 

prevail.

 

Some people believe that genetic engineering have a possibly of causing harm to the

 

future of the human race if we genetic engineer our children which would support why genetic

 

engineering of humans is largely unethical.  Bernard Gert, the Eunice and Julian Cohen Professor

 

for the Study of Ethics and Human Values at Dartmouth College, stated:

 

“... genetic therapy risks great harm for many in future generations and that there is not

 

sufficient harm prevented to justify these risks.  Genetic therapy, like genetic

 

enhancement, not only is permanent during the entire lifetime of the affected individual,

 

the transgene becomes inheritably transmitted to countless members of future

 

generations.

 

Advocates that support genetic engineering of humans is ethical it is because genetic

 

engineering prevent our children from getting undesirable genes that can give them life-

 

threatening illnesses.    Also, it is our duty to use our intellect to pursuit for more knowledge and

 

achieve new scientific breakthrough.  An example of a scientific breakthrough is found in Mary

 

Shelley’s Frankenstein when Victor’s mind precluded into thinking about making his creation, he

 

questioned himself, “Whence, I often asked myself, did the principle of life proceed?  Another

 

reason why genetic engineering of humans is ethical is that Oliver Morton, a contributing editor

 


 

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at Wired magazine editor at Wired magazine stated:

 

“Biology, after all, is about life, not nature.  It’s just an accident of history that, until

 

recently, everything alive was more or less natural.  Nature is a record of 4 billion years

 

of life’s successes, written in the language of the genes.  Biology’s new strength comes

 

from being able to read that record; cracking the genetic code has ushered in one of those

 

wonderful eras of scientific progress when new discoveries keep leading to new

 

techniques with which yet discoveries can be made.”

 

Advocates including Bernard Gert claims that genetic engineering is an unethical ordeal

 

it is back up by the fact that positive eugenics or genetic enhancements is morally wrong just

 

because it is dealing with something we do not know that there are risks.

 

            Advocates opposes this because they believe that that a species’ genetic variation affords

 

evolutionary plasticity or there is a potential for new subsequent adaptation.

 

            Lee M. Silver, a molecular biologist and the author of Remaking Eden: Cloning and

 

Beyond in a Brave New World, who believe that human cloning is ethical quoted, “Real human

 

clones will simply be later-born identical twins—nothing more and nothing less.”  According to

 

Lee M. Silver, he concluded that most people are against human cloning because of religious 

 

beliefs that he feels are not good enough to influence public policy to be on their side on human

 

cloning.   

 

            E.V. Kontorovich, a writer living in New York, who claims that human cloning, is

 

unethical quoted, “Cloning would take the humanity out of human reproduction, and in doing so

 

rob our spirits of something that cannot be replaced artificially.”  According to him, he believe

 

that the relationship between the cloned child and their parent would be awkward, and the clone

 

might be viewed as an economic good that as made than rather a person who was born.  Also, it

 

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is unethical that the scientists harvest organs from cloned human fetuses. 

 

            People who are on the same side as Lee M. Silver believe than cloned children will be no

 

different in biological terms from everybody else of the species.  According to Lee, one of the

 

reasons why there are so many scholars, ethicists, and scientists that oppose human cloning

 

it is because they wonder if it is safe or not.  Since the cloning process has not been proven to be

 

safe and its applications toward generation of newborn children could have negative

 

consequences such as birth defects.  Secondly, they are afraid of the psychological effect of the

 

cloned child even if the physical defects are preventable.  And at last, the skeptics are worried

 

about the negative effect that cloning will have an impact on the whole society.  His reason

 

about would why people make these excuses up to oppose human cloning stated:

 

            “They have latched on to arguments about safety, psychology, and society because they

 

            are simply unable to come up with an ethical argument that is not based on the religious

 

            notion that by cloning human beings man will be playing God and it is wrong to play

 

God.”

 

Kontorovich like other advocates who are against human cloning believe that human

 

cloning will be an advance where it will undermines the human race in the long run.  That is

 

there is a good reason that all higher life forms are reproduced through the process of random

 

combination of the DNA by the two parents.  In respond to changes in the environmental

 

changes, the genotypes goes through constant change, failure to vary the genotype would creates

 

genetic stagnation that can be harmful to all forms of life.

 

            People that are for human cloning and it is ethical including Lee M. Silver agree that

 

human cloning will not harm society because if human cloning is going to become legal, the

 

cloned children would only be accounted for a fraction of a percent of all the children born into

 

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world.   

  
nona the brit  #313579  Wed, 10 Jan 07 07:37 PM
Sorry but  I don't think it would be ethical for us to help you with one of your English test papers.
  
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