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Velectro  #376224  Thu, 07 Jun 07 02:05 PM

Hi,

A recruit sent me a job spec and wanted to know if I would be interested. I'd like to say that I'm interested ad subject they sent but I don't know if I well used the verb submitted. Please keep an eye on my reply mail:

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 Dear ***,

 

Thank you for the interest in my skills.

 

I’m really interested in the position of Sales Engineer you submitted.

 

Please find enclosed my word adjourned CV and Cover Letter.

 

I look forward to hearing from you,

 

Best regards,

 

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Clive  #376225  Thu, 07 Jun 07 02:11 PM

Hi,

A recruit sent me a job spec and wanted to know if I would be interested. I'd like to say that I'm interested ad subject they sent but I don't know if I well used the verb submitted. No, it's a formal word that is not appropriate here. Please keep an eye on my reply mail:

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 Dear ***,

Thank you for the information. I’m really interested in this position of Sales Engineer. Please find enclosed my word adjourned CV and Cover Letter.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

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What does 'word adjourned' mean?

Best wishes, Clive
  
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Velectro  #376231  Thu, 07 Jun 07 02:27 PM

Means a word file type and adjourned CV.

Moreover I'd like, in business manner, to thank him for to choice my cv for this position. So I think to write different from "Than you for the information".

What do you think, how can I change?
  
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Clive  #376240  Thu, 07 Jun 07 02:46 PM

Hi,

How about 'I am very grateful for your assistance in my job search'?

Best wishes, Clive
  
Velectro  #376246  Thu, 07 Jun 07 02:54 PM

He is proposing me a job, is not helping me in my job search. Is a thin difference..
  
Clive  #376403  Thu, 07 Jun 07 10:10 PM

Hi,

Then say I'm very grateful for this offer of a job.Smile [:)]

Clive
  
Anonymous  #376441  Fri, 08 Jun 07 12:37 AM
 Velectro wrote:

adjourned CV.

adjourned = "aggiornato"?  maybe "updated" or "up-to-date" ...

  
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