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Thu, 24 Feb 05 04:27 AM
Hello Teachers!
Could you please check my sentences for grammar and vocabulary?
Your health, now when you need it the most, has betrayed you. Nevertheless, we know that your undefeated determination can conquer any obstacle in its path.
Our sincere wishes for your speedy recovery and successful presentation.
Thank you very much for your help!
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Mister Micawber
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Thu, 24 Feb 05 05:04 AM
The grammar is OK (I have no idea what you mean by 'presentation', though), but the whole piece is a bit overblown. I'd use something like:
'Don't let this setback get you down. We know you will come back strong! Best wishes for your speedy recovery.'
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