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Latest post Thu, Oct 18 2007 4:00 AM by julielai. 1 replies.
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Anonymous  +  431533 Tue, 16 Oct 07 07:22 PM

How many ways can I describe this

 love so distant, dissolving all limitations.

Everlasting, it may seem but my paitence

is wearing thin.

I wake with an aura of sadness

alone, disassembled, far...

This feeling, its more than

an itch I can't scratch, more than a love

gone to waste, its more than questions left

unanswered. This feeling is numbing,

this feeling has left me stranded, waiting..

But when I see you, after

weeks of seperation...this feeling

seems to cease as I fall in your eyes.
Anonymous
julielai  +  431906 Thu, 18 Oct 07 04:00 AM

Highlighted a few things you may want to fix.

 Anonymous wrote:

How many ways can I describe this

 love so distant, dissolving (what do you mean) all limitations.

Everlasting, it may seem but my paitence (sp)

is wearing thin.

I wake with an aura of sadness

alone, disassembled, far...

This feeling, its more than

an itch I can't scratch, more than a love

gone to waste, its more than questions left

unanswered. This feeling is numbing,

this feeling has left me stranded, waiting..

But when I see you, after

weeks of seperation...this feeling

seems to cease as I fall in your eyes.
julielai
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