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Latest post Sat, Sep 4 2004 12:45 AM by TheBob. 5 replies.
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TheBob
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Sat, 04 Sep 04 12:45 AM
( poem deleted at original poster's request-- MM)
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Guest,
5 yr 81 days ago
totally awesome dude..... thanx
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lilbit
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Sun, 05 Sep 04 02:08 AM
thebob,
is this something you wrote because you have experienced this? This one is a heart breaker...... Let me know
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TheBob
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Sun, 05 Sep 04 02:54 AM
No, i havent realy experienced it. My dad still lives, here with me, my brother and my mom. This day, i just felt realy down, and sometimes when im bord, and i have a lot on my mind, and im feelin down, i just write poetry, and this day, i had a hole lot on my mind. I was just thinkin about how bad it would be to loose a father, and iv just kinda been down, lately, so yeah. I just wrote it cause it was on my mind.
p.s. Thankyou for reading and replying
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lilbit
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Tue, 07 Sep 04 07:41 PM
Well maybe it is a way to release some of the sadness that you are having. I use to do the same thing sorta. I would keep a journal of my thoughts of how I felt when looking for my mother. Plus I was able to keep alot of important information that way too. So that when I would get down and out, I would go back and read what I had wrote from an earlier time.
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hypnopaedic,
5 yr 32 days ago
I like the flow of this piece, it's somewhat depressing, yet captivating as well. Great work.
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