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Anonymous  +  557927 Sun, 24 Aug 08 01:29 AM
Hi,
Let us pretend that John Doe has uttered these words with Xed-out words.

John Doe: *** men need to exercise more, rather than eating and eating; they need to move around.

If someone wants to incorporate this into his writing, what ways are available? I think it talks about men of a certain country (or from a certain region) not doing enough physical exercises. Any guidelines or tips? 

1. All along, I have argued that people around the world have grown less active as supported by what John Doe said, "*** men need to exercise more, rather than eating and eating; they need to move around.'

2. My research has indicated that people from *** have grown inactive over the last few years. With growing wealth and technology seem to have come a less need to move around as supported by what John Doe said, "*** men need to exercise more, rather than eating and eating; they need to move around."

3. I would argue that men of *** "need to exercise more" as John Doe said.

If I couldn't remember who said this and the exact words, how could I incorporate it into the writing? Like this? Any better way?

I have been talking about the need to exercise more by men around the world, like what someone has said something to the effect that men of *** need to exercise more and move around and should keep on eating and eating without doing any substantial exercises. 

Sorry for a long question but why it did not put "we" inside the quotation marks??

"We have made a mistake." John Doe proclaimed to his students, and we "have made fools of ourselves."  
Clive  +  557955 Sun, 24 Aug 08 05:39 AM
Hi,
Let us pretend that John Doe has uttered these words with Xed-out words.

John Doe: *** men need to exercise more, rather than eating and eating; they need to move around.

If someone wants to incorporate this into his writing, what ways are available? I think it talks about men of a certain country (or from a certain region) not doing enough physical exercises. Any guidelines or tips? 
You can do this in various ways. Here's how I might approach your examples below.

1. All along, I have argued that people around the world have grown less active. This view is supported by John Doe's remark that "*** men need to exercise more, rather than eating and eating; they need to move around.'

2. My research has indicated that people from *** have grown inactive over the last few years. With growing wealth and technology seem to have come a less need to move around, as supported by John Doe, who noted that "*** men need to exercise more, rather than eating and eating; they need to move around."

3. I would argue that "men of *** "need to exercise more", as John Doe said.

If I couldn't remember who said this and the exact words, how could I incorporate it into the writing? Like this? Any better way?  If you can't remember the words, you can't offer them as direct quotes. You might say Some people believe that **** men need to exercise more  . . . .  

  

I have been talking about the need by men around the world to exercise more . It has been said that men of *** need to exercise more and move around and should keep on eating and eating without doing any substantial exercises. 

Sorry for a long question but why it did not put "we" inside the quotation marks??

"We have made a mistake." John Doe proclaimed to his students, and we "have made fools of ourselves."
  
It suggests that he did not actually say the second word 'we'. eg Perhaps he said something like this.
 
"We have made a mistake and have made fools of ourselves".
or  "We have made a mistake, and you and I have Made fools of ourselves".

Best wishes, Clive
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