Hi all,
I have been using my CV around for some months, and suddenly, an HR agent asked me to correct “several” grammatical errors in it. I have asked an English-speaking friend to review it. But, as I have added some changes or updates, I may have introduce some errors.
Would you please review it? I have posted only its first part. I don’t want to abuse from your patience.
I am very curious to know what is wrong with it. Please, focus only on the English grammar and not in template, model and so on.
Disregard some technical IT acronyms.
Thanks a million.
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AREA
BUSINESS INTELLIGENCE / DATA WAREHOUSING CONSULTING
EDUCATION
Computer Science Bachelor Degree
*** University of ***, 1994 ~ 1997.
SKILLS SUMMARY
* 12 years on IT industry: consultancies and software vendors.
* Customer facing experience on pre sales, project, delivery, and support roles.
* Ability to discuss technical issues with business approach (ROI, TCO, SLA, SabOx, SOA)
* Experience as DBA, Analyst and Developer in projects on several industries: banking, telecom, retail, health insurance, energy, marketing and public sector.
* Blue chip company experience: ACME, XYZ, XPTO.
BUSINESS INTELLIGENCE EXPERIENCE
* As pre sales: POC’s definition, building and presentation. Business value propositions.
* Business requirements analysis and specifications definition.
* Data analysis and modeling: designing data warehouse models, facts, dimensions, star schemas, using Kimball methodology.
* ETL: data sources definitions, data transformations and loads, mappings.
* Deployment: BI tools, apps and data warehouse database installation, schema and metadata deployment, initial loads, database tuning, and ETL jobs scheduling.
INTERESTS
* Project Management
* Financial Industry
* BI&W, BPM, EPM
PERSONAL
* Consulting and costumer facing experience.
* Self-studying. Analytical and problem solving skills.
* Dynamic, team player, flexible.
* EU Citizen. EU passport holder. Travel availability.
LANGUAGE SKILLS
* Portuguese: native language.
* Spanish: fluent reading and good conversational level.
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