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#514424 Fri, 16 May 08 02:32 PM

which one is correct??could u give me the reasons??thx

A1.Does Business Intelligence Have Benefits for Company Decision Making?

A2.Does Business Intelligence Provide Benefits for Company Decision Making?

A3.Does Business Intelligence Has Benefits for Company Decision Making?

B1.offers a solution to maintain the data regularly in order to improve the quality of data in the systems.

B2.offers a solution to regular data maintenance by sysadmin in order to improve the quality of data in the systems.

B3.offers a solution to regularly maintain the data in order to improve the quality of data in the systems.

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Clive

#514427 Fri, 16 May 08 02:41 PM

Hi,

First, try to tell us what you think, and your reason. Smile

Best wishes, Clive

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poci_wasiats

#514428 Fri, 16 May 08 02:45 PM

A) i want to judge BI is required by a company or not??

B)i want to tell to get clean data, ive to maintain the data regularly..

thx...

Clive

#514449 Fri, 16 May 08 03:42 PM

Hi,

I don't understand your last post, so I'll just comment on your first post.

which one is correct??could u give me the reasons??thx

A1.Does Business Intelligence Have Benefits for Company Decision Making?

A2.Does Business Intelligence Provide Benefits for Company Decision Making?

A3.Does Business Intelligence ~~Has~~ Have Benefits for Company Decision Making?

The capital letters make all the above seem like titles, eg for an article or a presentation.

A1 and A2 are fine. In A3, you need the bare, uninflected infinitive. The inflection is in the word 'does'.

B1.offers a solution to maintain the data regularly in order to improve the quality of data in the systems.

B2.offers a solution to regular data maintenance by sysadmin in order to improve the quality of data in the systems.

B3.offers a solution to regularly maintain the data in order to improve the quality of data in the systems.

All of these B versions are incomplete sentences, because they have no subject.

'. . . a solution to maintain . . . ' is awkward and unclear. I'd say ' . . . a solution that maintains . . . '

Best wishes, Clive