uktous  +  957477 Fri, 30 Oct 09 08:16 PM sorry, I am not good at writing , so I hope someone can give me few opinion about which of the following sentence is the best. I have all the required skills stated in your website,  as demonstrated in my past career,  and I am keen to develop myself,  so I think I will be a good employee inyour company. As demonstrated in my past career,  I have all the required skills stated in your website,  and I am keen to develop myself,  so I think Iwill be a good employee in your company.    As demonstrated in my past career I have all the required skills stated in your website,  and I am keen to develop myself,  so I think Iwill be a good employee in your company. I am keen to develop myself,  and  I have all the required skills stated in your website  as demonstrated in my pastcareer,  so I think I will be a good employee in your company. I am keen to develop myself,  and  I have all the required skills stated in your website, as demonstrated in my pastcareer, so I think I will be a good employee in your company. uktous Joined on Mon, Oct 26 2009 Full Member 104 Sentences, Apologies, Online, Websites

	Clive  +  957557 Fri, 30 Oct 09 10:08 PM Hi, Here's my first reaction. Pretend I am an employer who reads this. Why should I care that you are keen to develop yourself? What I am looking for is someone who can help me with my problems in my business In other words, and particularly when you start your sentence with it, it makes you sound very interested in yourself. How would you answer if I asked you to explain this, in a job interview? Best wishes, Clive Clive Joined on Thu, Oct 28 2004 Canada Veteran Member 29,627 El tango argentino es un pensamiento triste que se puede bailar (The tango argentino is a sad thought which can be danced) Enrique Santos Discépolo

	uktous  +  958241 Sat, 31 Oct 09 05:39 PM are you asking "why are you keen to develop yourself?" uktous Sentences

	Fandorin  +  958322 Sat, 31 Oct 09 07:33 PM I bet Clive is asking you, if he were an employee, to persuade him that you will be able to produce results, be good at the job you're applying to and, in other words, why you can be useful for him or business he has got. Fandorin Joined on Thu, Dec 20 2007 Moscow Contributing Member 1,382 Whatever happens, be yourself. Business, Sentences, Careers