Who rode / was riding

   Share on Facebook  
Vincent Teo  #560443  Sat, 30 Aug 08 02:32 PM
Can I say,

Suddenly, a man who rode / was riding a motorcycle snatched Susan's handbag. She was very scared because she had many cash in her handbag. The motorcyclist went away as fast as he could. She shouted for help. Two men came out of the shop to help her, but it was too late. She was sad, but she also thanked the men for helping her.
  
Top 25 Contributor
Joined on Sat, Mar 31 2007
Senior Member (4,067)
Philip  #560462  Sat, 30 Aug 08 03:16 PM
[A man riding] is enough.  Otherwise, 'who was riding,' but not 'who rode'.
  
Top 25 Contributor
Joined on Thu, Jun 23 2005
USA Pacific Northwest (Seattle)
Veteran Member (6,333)
ModeratorProficient Speaker
At reise er at leve! - H. C. Andersen
Vincent Teo  #560468  Sat, 30 Aug 08 03:21 PM
Thanks. I try:

Suddenly, a man who was riding a motorcycle snatched Susan's handbag. She was very scared because she had many cash in her handbag. The motorcyclist went away as fast as he could. She shouted for help. Two men came out of the shop to help her, but it was too late. She was sad, but she also thanked the men for helping her.

How about others (underline sentences) ? all correct?
  
Philip  #560535  Sat, 30 Aug 08 09:31 PM
much or a lot of cash.
'Many' is used for countable nouns.  Coins and bills are countable but the word cash is not.
  
AddThis Feed Button RSS Feed: ESL General English Grammar Questions
© 2008 MediaCET Ltd.
Terms and Conditions & Terms of Service