Thanks. I try:
Suddenly, a man who was riding a motorcycle snatched Susan's handbag. She was very scared
because she had many cash in her handbag. The motorcyclist went away as fast as he could. She shouted for help. Two men came out of the shop to help her, but it was too late. She was sad, but she also thanked the men for helping her.
How about others (underline sentences) ? all correct?