Why is it wrong?

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Anonymous  #415020  Thu, 06 Sep 07 01:03 PM

Hi,

Please tell me why any of these is wrong.

1. I talked to Joe on the phone while playing tennis. -- Here, "while" is a conjunction, I think, and what comes after should be a clause, but why "playing tennis"? It doesn't look like a clause.

2. I talked to Joe on the phone while I was playing tennis. -- Here, an appropriate clause seems to follow the conjunction "while." Good sentence

3. I talked to Joe on the phone while Jim (or I) playing tennis -- What is wrong is this? Is "playing tennis" a noun phrase? I think so.  

  
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Mister Micawber  #415031  Thu, 06 Sep 07 01:24 PM

1. I talked to Joe on the phone while playing tennis. -- Here, "while" is a conjunction, I think, and what comes after should be a clause, but why "playing tennis"? It doesn't look like a clause. --  'Playing tennis' is a non-finite clause:  I talked to Joe on the phone while [I was] playing tennis.  'I' because the unspoken subject of the nonfinite clause should be the same as the subject of the main clause.

2. I talked to Joe on the phone while I was playing tennis. -- Here, an appropriate clause seems to follow the conjunction "while." Good sentence -- Yes.

3. I talked to Joe on the phone while Jim (or I) playing tennis -- What is wrong is this? Is "playing tennis" a noun phrase? I think so. -- No. The sentence is incorrect. You have added the subject (Jim, I), which now demands a finite verb:  while Jim was playing tennis.



  
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Ticce  #415032  Thu, 06 Sep 07 01:25 PM
I think first two options are ok. As for the third one I am not sure.
  
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