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Antonija  #205488  Sun, 12 Mar 06 05:01 PM

Hello!

The second sentence doesn't seem clear to me. How can I make it better so that it's clearer that ''three'' refers to widows?

In the unconscious of every adulterer there are images of his funeral party with two widows. Even three, if one is really young.

  
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davkett  #205511  Sun, 12 Mar 06 05:31 PM

Maybe--

In the unconscious of every adulterer there are images of his funeral party with two widows--even three, if one is really young.


 

  
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Antonija  #205527  Sun, 12 Mar 06 06:26 PM
Sounds good now. Thank you Davkett.
  
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