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Latest post Tue, Apr 24 2007 10:55 AM by Puzzled. 4 replies.
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Ahn  +  354695 Mon, 23 Apr 07 08:58 PM

The shooting rampage will have caused us deep hurt forevermore.

or

The shooting rampage will cause us deep hurt forevermore .

 

The shooting rampage will have caused us deep hurt forevermore but it is time for us to make an effort to compose ourselves.

 

--->and how about this sentence?

 

 

Ahn
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Goodman  +  354702 Mon, 23 Apr 07 09:22 PM
 Ahn wrote:

The shooting rampage will have caused us deep hurt forevermore.

or

The shooting rampage will cause us deep hurt forevermore .

 

The shooting rampage will have caused us deep hurt forevermore but it is time for us to make an effort to compose ourselves.

 

--->and how about this sentence?

 

“Will cause” is the wrong tense in this context. The shooting rampage presumably is an event already happened.  Consider this:

The shooting rampage has caused us deep scares that will take a long time to heal.

 

 

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Ahn, 2 yr 217 days ago

Thank you for your answer Goodman.\

You are a goodman. Big Smile [:D]

Cool Breeze  +  354736 Mon, 23 Apr 07 11:20 PM
Hi Ahn

I see nothing wrong with
The shooting rampage will cause us deep hurt for ever/forever / forevermore.

Cheers
CB
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"I hope you'll all live to be 150 years old - and the last voice you hear is mine!" Frank Sinatra on stage in Oslo, Norway, 28 September 1991
Puzzled  +  354889 Tue, 24 Apr 07 10:55 AM

Hi,

I would suggest that a logical sequence describing what is going to happen after what has happened requires a 'will' construction. To me there is a clash between 'will have caused' and the following 'for evermore' that doesn't really make sense.

Puzzled

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