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There are two great cliffs located at Lake Nichols Landing in Tuscaloosa. They both can be found just off the winding footpath, through the wooded area as you get to the clearing. Many people do not know the exact location of these cliffs because there aren’t any posted signs or visible indication that there are cliffs there. For that very reason, the cliffs are never crowded. A beautiful nature scene greets people as they arrive. Both cliffs share impressive views that skim the horizon, and a calming pool of water, deep enough for jumping, rests at its feet. Despite these similarities, each cliff is quite different.
To begin with, access to the cliffs can be challenging. The first cliff is directly up a gently sloped hill and is easily accessible. After arriving at the clearing, a person can see the first cliff within minutes. It is a short hike up the straight trail and left at the weather-worn oak tree. In contrast, the other cliff is not as easily accessible, and its view is hidden from unaware people passing by. One might say that it is a hiker’s delight. A person has to hike farther up the rock-strewn hill, through the dense woods, until they reach a narrow trail. The trail then winds for a good five to seven minutes until they finally reach a patch of brush. The other cliff is just past the dead patch and is a larger well-shaded area that is more secluded than the first cliff.
Admittedly, jumping off the high cliffs are dangerous, but the drop-off distances appeal to enthusiasts on many levels. Many thrill seekers are still keen on tempting their fate and taking the leap. The first cliff has a 20-foot drop to get to the water. People prefer to jump from this cliff because jumping 20-feet doesn’t seem so daunting. A daring individual will stand at the edge of the cliff without being intimidated. There are no obstacles to interfere with the jump, and it is a clean shot to the cool water. Alternatively, the other cliff is much higher with a 30-foot drop. Many people tend to stay away from this cliff because of how high it is. It takes either a very courageous, or a very frivolous, individual to launch themselves off a 30-foot cliff into thin air. They must take a deep breath and a running start to avoid the jagged rocks and trees below. Clearly, this cliff is the more dangerous of the two.
Lastly, climbing out of the water is not the easiest of tasks. If jumping off the first cliff, a person needs to climb out of the water on the left side of the natural stone. The dirt path is not a difficult climb and is soft on the feet. The smooth rock steps are well formed and easily spotted due to many visitors trampling up and down the route. Consequently, climbing out of the water from the other cliff may require a bit more exertion. A person has to repel up a small overgrown rock trail, while grasping at young branches and trees for support. They trek through a heavily wooded area and murky water. Even on the brightest of days, the soggy path seems dark and damp. It is like walking barefooted through patches of thick mud and leaves. If a person is not careful, they could easily slip on the slimy rocks or even worse – encounter bugs or snakes! It actually is very scary.
On a final note, the cliffs at Lake Nichols may differ in many ways, but nevertheless, their similarities have one goal in common: to be there for everyone to enjoy. Whichever cliffs people choose, they should be aware that both cliffs have rewards and risks. It all depends on what type of adventure they are looking for.